Sunday, November 23, 2008

"The Concept of Peace" WA3 D1

Peace: Freedom from oppressive thoughts or emotion.
Most turmoil is caused by a lack of willpower and consideration towards each other
and because peaceful thoughts are so rarely found in the mist of angst and distress
We seem to undermine our need for tranquility. 
Because we are the roots that either feed or destroy our ideal of peace it is neccesary to act justly and righteously to our fellow man. 
These angry broadcasts are normally the projection of our own insecurities so without inner peace global peace is impossible.
This is our duty to our self.

Peace: a state of tranquillity; freedom from civil disturbances.
While no community, region or country is absent of peace that same area cannot free from discord and turmoil. 
This is the necessary juxtaposition of peace.  
Without defined oppression their can be no freedom
Without disagreement we cannot have unity. 
Even though these two forces have been present and will remain significant through all time we as communities and nations strive to live free of turmoil.
This is our duty to each other. 



1 comment:

Ms. Wiesner said...

Is this supposed to be formatted like this? I like the idea of the line lengths being unpredictable if you're emphasizing the unpredicatbility of war, but make sure the rhythm still works. The rhythm doesn't work now.

Very nice: "This is the necessary juxtaposition of peace.
Without defined oppression their can be no freedom"